What do you think? Oh boy. I suppose the essence was captured. (What is that tan rectangle, lower right?) But I would have filled it differently.
- First off, is this how people eat? I mean, is it realistic to recommend steamed "protein" and boiled vegetables to a construction worker? To a fast food employee? An office worker? That is, to anyone who isn't home or near a kitchen during the day? OK, I guess you could brown-bag it.
- The proportions. I can see right off that their effort to visualize "more of this and less of that" has failed.
- The "protein" people must be very happy that their "protein" is singled out and included in every meal an American is advised to eat. Likewise dairy. Manu said it best: "Dairy sits in a cup? what's the meaning of this you should drink dairy at every meal like it was water?"